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I was browsing around dA after i submitted this and came across [link] it's is so nice to know that people are thinking just like me, kudos, go check their awesome gallery.

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=JVarriano May 12, 2009, 3:16:03 PM
Every now and then I come across a "conceptual" photo that is simple, yet tells a great story if you have an imagination. This is one of those photos!

What caught my eye at first was the color contrast between the pages of the book and the scrap of paper. The torn edges of the piece of paper catch the focus in a subtle way that still allows them to softly maintain their detail.

I imagine that different words from the pages of the book stood out to others, but for me the words that stood out were children, intrigue, and honest. This is most likely due to my personal relationships, which makes the photo mean that much more.

I know that the point of a critique is to view art with a critical eye, but I can't find anything I would do differently!

Thanks for sharing.
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=purapuss Apr 8, 2009, 7:12:00 AM
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=Jude20 Apr 8, 2009, 7:28:34 AM
great concept :D *hats off*

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~shnooroka Apr 8, 2009, 8:11:16 AM
what is the name of the book?
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`orangefruits Apr 8, 2009, 8:17:49 AM
Falling Leaves by Adeline Yen Mah

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`conorschild Apr 8, 2009, 8:29:04 AM
SO YOU'RE THE ONE WHO KEEPS DOING THIS

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~moonbeam-goddess Apr 8, 2009, 9:45:04 AM
I like all the colour combination, nice and subtle. This has a nice feel to it :)

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^snowmask Apr 8, 2009, 10:24:51 AM
I love that the first thing I see beneath this message, is "lacks guts". Somehow there's a coy juxtaposition there.

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`orangefruits Apr 8, 2009, 10:40:17 AM
hehe, maybe i planned that.
actually i didn't plan that.

:giggle:

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~sns95 Apr 8, 2009, 11:56:39 AM
this is such a touching shot.
:+fav: excellent composition and colors... everything just ties together.

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*Nightwing67 Apr 8, 2009, 12:33:44 PM
Lovely... nicely done xx

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